Enmity Act 4

[cedar_grove]

Title: Enmity
Rating: R (mature readers)
Spoilers:Spoilers for S1-4, (specifically Michael (but who hasn't seen that by now?) and some episodes from the beginning of the official season 5
Summary: As the team continues to battle a powerful Wraith faction, Teyla wakes in the infirmary on Atlantis. She has no memory of what Michael has done to her; knows only one thing... he has her son. Upset by repeated attempts at debriefing, because she cannot - or will not, as certain expedition members insist - tell them what happened, what will she do when Woolsey pushes her too hard... too far?
Disclaimer:MGM own Stargate: Atlantis. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no revenue is being made from copyright material. No infrigement intended.

Acts 1 through 4 now available.

Author's Note: Only thing I really want to note here, for now at least, is that I thought long and hard about it, and finally made the decision to change the name of Teyla's son. This was done in order to create a little distance from the TV Season 5. Oh, and I should probably also give warning of a character death in this story.

Previous Episodes:
Harm's Way (1) and Chain of Command (2) can be accessed here.

Comments

LOVE IT

[wraith-babe.livejournal.com]

I LOVE your episodes! They're the BEST I've read, all of your characters are so in depth and you even add more to existing characters while keeping them true to themselves. I must say though my favourite is the Queen she is something else, and she likes Todd :D, well who wouldn't ;D Please tell me they hook up or something like that. I just love them together. Oh, and when he grabbed her, woo my mind went of on tangents shall we say ;D or who knows maybe she likes it that way ;D.

Anywho, can wait for more and keep up the great work. Love ya :D

Later

Re: LOVE IT

[cedargrove.livejournal.com]

First of all, welcome aboard... It's always good, I think anyway, to read what people think.

I enjoy the character development, and trying to keep the characters true to themselves with some of the things that are 'revealed' to me by the Muse. The Elder Queen has been quite a challenge, but also fun to play with. The most challenging part of her character is her fickle nature, and her explosive temper.

We'll get to see a lot more of her in the episodes to come - sometimes almost literally. LOL