Enmity Act 4
Nov. 11th, 2008 10:42 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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Title: Enmity
Rating: R (mature readers)
Spoilers:Spoilers for S1-4, (specifically Michael (but who hasn't seen that by now?) and some episodes from the beginning of the official season 5
Summary: As the team continues to battle a powerful Wraith faction, Teyla wakes in the infirmary on Atlantis. She has no memory of what Michael has done to her; knows only one thing... he has her son. Upset by repeated attempts at debriefing, because she cannot - or will not, as certain expedition members insist - tell them what happened, what will she do when Woolsey pushes her too hard... too far?
Disclaimer:MGM own Stargate: Atlantis. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no revenue is being made from copyright material. No infrigement intended.
Acts 1 through 4 now available.
Author's Note: Only thing I really want to note here, for now at least, is that I thought long and hard about it, and finally made the decision to change the name of Teyla's son. This was done in order to create a little distance from the TV Season 5. Oh, and I should probably also give warning of a character death in this story.
Previous Episodes:
Harm's Way (1) and Chain of Command (2) can be accessed here.
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Re: Enmity Act 4: Review - Part 2
Date: 2008-11-13 04:41 pm (UTC)Todd was chuckling because he can appreciate the humour in the statement... at least in as far as it went.
Todd, is an interesting one - perfect gentleman, erm... no. Not exactly...
LOL Neutered Wraith. *chuckles* If Michael got his way, yeah.
Todd is turning out to be quite the complicated fellow actually... very interesting...
Do you have a special theory about Todd indeed knowing his name (in your story, and on the real show)? Or did he just immediately assume that the name spoken must have been ‘his’, since the Lanteans like to name things?
I'm sure, with the intelligence that Todd no doubt has people gathering for him about Atlantis, and the people there, that he's well aware that Sheppard calls him Todd. Not quite sure entirely how he /feels/ about it just yet... but... he knows.
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LOL - NO! I am /not/ writing Sheppard/Michael slash. *ewwwww*
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Yeah, Woolsey is an all round 'ass' and it's only going to get worse... (ooops, that was my out aloud voice)
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Michael is very /good/ at poking people where it hurts, don't you think?
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She does know better... but she also knows they know she knows... so... she did it slightly a different way. But then you know that by now. :)
Re: Enmity Act 4: Review - Part 2
Date: 2008-11-15 05:07 pm (UTC)Okay, maybe that should have been 'Wraithy-man'. Hmm, that looks odd.
Ouch, maybe Michael should be happy that he's still in one piece, or pieces, down there.
I wonder if Kenny told Todd they call him 'Todd', or if Kenny said they called him 'Kenny'... Could be an interesting convo to bring up.
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Not even Todd/Shep? *g*
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I didn't quite catch that... ;-)
I hope Hollick stays down.
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Oh yes, Michael *is*, but then again, it would hurt *him* in exactly the same places, were it reversed.
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Yes, when you put it like that... But McKay was still trying, I think? Silly boy. But she'll be on the move again soon, I think, since she already had that panic-y reaction after the dream in the next Act.
Spikey
Re: Enmity Act 4: Review - Part 2
Date: 2008-11-17 12:55 am (UTC)Michael should be very happy.
I doubt it.
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Not even Todd/Shep, no!
Re: Enmity Act 4: Review - Part 2
Date: 2008-11-17 01:21 am (UTC)Not that Todd is doing his dang hardest to pretend he fully listens to her...
It might even make Teyla happier, lol.
Like they also didn't hear in The Queen that Teyla was sending out so many Darts to kill Wraith...
No Todd/Shep? Awe!
Spikey