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.... who is an awesome woman... anyway...
If you happen to be working on some creative writing project, fanfiction or NaNoWriMo or what have you, post exactly one sentence from each of your current work(s) in progress in your journal. It should probably be your favourite or most intriguing sentence so far, but what you choose is entirely your discretion. Mention the title (and genre) if you like, but don't mention anything else -- this is merely to whet the general appetite for your forthcoming work(s).



So here they all are... enjoy. I enjoyed the selection.


"I am the pariah that lurks in the dark corners of every heart, the demon that waits in the night to corrupt the innocent, pervert the just, and exploit the weak... I am the angel of death that will tear down the hypocrites, expose the false overlords and bring them to their knees. I. Am. Vengeance." - Mantle SGA Fic.


"Take us out, Mister Miller - One Quarter impulse - steady as she goes, if you please... Let's not give Mister Tucker anything to complain about when we get him aboard," Malcolm ordered. - Persistence Part 1 - ST:ENT Fic


“Your First Medjai, whether you count him as the mutinous elder or as the man who is my husband, has by his will given me authority as First Lady of the Twelve Tribes.” - Star of the Morning - Mummy Returns Fic


The sands themselves reacted to the mention of her name as a hissing wind stirred them in small, ineffectual eddies around the legs and ankles of the men that were picking their way through the rubble. - Forbidden - The Mummy Fic


“These men have honoured their vows and given their lives in service to uphold the law in the desert. Their every action honoured and protected their people; cherished the lives of all the families in the desert as they did their own families, with the flesh of their bodies and the blood of the hearts..." - Precious - The Mummy Fic


As the second hand on his watch passed the thirty second marker something in the rhythm of Cody’s typing hesitated, almost a hiccup before Cody hissed, talking to himself, “Tell me I’m wrong…” - If... With No Choice - UC:Undercover Fic


“You scare me,” Kishan said, chuckling, “You should get out more - find yourself a real woman.” - Use'ara - Thirteen Stars Original Sci-Fi


I cheated on this last one, because I love the sequence of the conversation. It's more then one sentence.

“Then we’ve got to travel to the Middle East, find Ur, sneak in past some maniac that’s got your kids, convince the Nephilim and Grigori that they’re being used by an evil man to do evil work. Then we have to get them to come with us to Egypt, where we open the Sphinx chamber, get down inside there and free Shemyaza’s spirit to return to his body.”

“In a nutshell.” Bethany confirmed.

“Oh well then.” Martin snapped sarcastically, “No problem. Let’s go!”
- Nemesis - Original Horror

Date: 2008-11-24 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gospikey.livejournal.com
And then the chicken screamed. Lol!

Spikey

Date: 2008-11-27 09:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gospikey.livejournal.com
It's @ that SGA line?

Right after that magnificent speech by our little Pariah, the one whom it was addressed to, screamed. *g*

Spikey

Date: 2008-12-02 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cedargrove.livejournal.com
I see... I understand now... I was seeing a literal chicken.. LOL

Date: 2008-12-02 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gospikey.livejournal.com
LOL @ you!

A 'real' chicken screaming...

Glad to see you're home. I worked on the 'previously on' section, blue'ing the things that were blue in Act 4 again, and will put them in a Word file soon.

I've been a very nice girl today. Already worked for my red on GW... Lol.

Spikey

Date: 2008-12-02 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cedargrove.livejournal.com
Okay, on the blueing - sorry you're having to repeat yourself - that's what happens when I write too fast I guess.

What did you do to them this time?

Date: 2008-12-02 05:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gospikey.livejournal.com
No, that's okay. You couldn't have seen those, as they came from Act 4/5, which was with me. You did catch the 'eyes' thing, one of the final lines of Act 5, where Michael lifted his eyes from the floor, so... One less blue. :P

Oh man... It was on the games page. See, we're only allowed to vote once each day, so one post per thread. There was someone who had put up two posts in multiple threads. Like 4? On one thread she got called on it by a friend, and on two other threads, I said that I was ignoring the previous vote, hers, because it was a second post, and that they'd better read the rules. Well, she couldn't appreciate that. Now, when she was in that fourth thread, and had actually taken a point from a line/scene description with the message 'I don't like it' next to it, I went all 'argh' because that's not what the thread was for, so yeah... I left a message on that board again. She felt fixated by a bully, redded me, reported me, sent me messages that she was on the verge of crying, etc... Geesh. :P

Spikey

Date: 2008-12-02 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cedargrove.livejournal.com
Some people are just so sensitive.

Date: 2008-12-02 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gospikey.livejournal.com
Yes, her profile had her picture up, and she's young. Went all 'it's my first forum' on me, and so on, so... Poor girl, really.

I dropped her a note on her profile again, saying that she's welcome in the games, explained the rules in short, and that new blood and more scenes are welcome in the threads.

Also said to her that if she reds people, she should expect red back. Said that many people don't like the redding system, so if she's one of those she shouldn't spread it out either. If you give red, you're almost 100% sure of getting one back. She needs to get that.

Spikey

Aw...

Date: 2008-11-25 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] idic-writer.livejournal.com
Thanks for the compliment! :D And I love these selections. You're pretty awesome yourself. :*

Re: Aw...

Date: 2008-11-26 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cedargrove.livejournal.com
Thank you. :) Must get around to posting elsewhere too... damned NaNoWriMo... LOL

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