Enmity Act 4
Nov. 11th, 2008 10:42 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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Title: Enmity
Rating: R (mature readers)
Spoilers:Spoilers for S1-4, (specifically Michael (but who hasn't seen that by now?) and some episodes from the beginning of the official season 5
Summary: As the team continues to battle a powerful Wraith faction, Teyla wakes in the infirmary on Atlantis. She has no memory of what Michael has done to her; knows only one thing... he has her son. Upset by repeated attempts at debriefing, because she cannot - or will not, as certain expedition members insist - tell them what happened, what will she do when Woolsey pushes her too hard... too far?
Disclaimer:MGM own Stargate: Atlantis. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no revenue is being made from copyright material. No infrigement intended.
Acts 1 through 4 now available.
Author's Note: Only thing I really want to note here, for now at least, is that I thought long and hard about it, and finally made the decision to change the name of Teyla's son. This was done in order to create a little distance from the TV Season 5. Oh, and I should probably also give warning of a character death in this story.
Previous Episodes:
Harm's Way (1) and Chain of Command (2) can be accessed here.
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Date: 2008-11-16 11:52 pm (UTC)I just finished reading it all. I was soooo disapointed that there wasn't more to read yet. I need another fix. Bad. **am addicted to this series** What shall I read tonight and tomorrow? I have the day off and yet now nothing to read . . . Guess I should start writing again since I'll have some time while I wait for the next story.
I love that Michael had let Teyla go back to Atlantis to keep her safe and then was so angry when she's not. I couldn't understand why he let her go in the beginning, but then the story progress and little by little the truth and reasonings come out. Oh, Michael made a great choice to send her back . . . now Teyla doesn't trust Atlantis and she's becoming more and more sympathic to Michael.
How I love the layers upon layers upon layers of stuff written. This is really much better then the TV series.
Lorne? I love that he's be coming a hybrid. I don't know why, but I do. I hate that the writers couldn't do something like this because then they can't push that stupid reset button. And if they did, they would probably work it similar to Lt. Ford and eventually kill him off to end the arc and let it find a new reset starting point. **sighs**
And do you know what kind of fics I want to read now thanks to you? Todd/Vega fics. **snorts** They are great together. I can't wait to read more about them . . . even if it's not romantically (I'll just put on my rosy shipper glasses and think it is! :P).
And the ending? Gah! I want to know! How could you end it like that? Evil.
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Date: 2008-11-17 12:16 am (UTC)Well, I'm glad you just finished reading, because I just uploaded the first act of Mantle - which is the continuation of Enmity.
It was a big decision to treat Teyla they way she's treated on Atlantis, but as you say, it does facilitate certain... choices.
The layers come because, as the characters develop, and reveal more and more to me... things start to get more and more complicated. :) But that's the way I like it.
Ah, the good Major-Lorne Hybrid - we haven't seen the last of him yet... even if he /is/ back on Atlantis now.
LOL - I have created a monster. You and Spikey both seem to enjoy the Todd/Vega moments... I think you will like Mantle Act 2 in that case.
Yes, I am evil... it will be a while before you'll see that one completely resolved/revealed. But more will come in Mantle.
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Date: 2008-11-17 12:27 am (UTC)**grabs printed pages of Mantle Act1 to read**
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Date: 2008-11-17 12:39 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2008-11-17 01:36 am (UTC)Poor, poor needy Todd. And Mikey.
Oh, I think Eiri means Mantle Act 3, because I read Act 2 today, and there's no Todd/Vega in there.
But it looks promising for Act 3, though. *g*
In a couple of days Act 2 might be up, so the wait isn't too long.
We should probably make Eiri write faster, now, though. We're devouring this faster than she can write it.
Oopsie, about a quarter to 3. Bed time.
*Grabs the boys and runs upstairs*
Spikey
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