Chain of Command Act 2

[cedar_grove]

Title: Chain of Command
Rating: R (mature readers)
Spoilers: Set after The Last Man so spoilers for S1-4 and the beginning of S5.
Summary: When the IOA replaces Carter as the head of the Atlantis Expedition, and the first thing that happens is the alienation of long standing allies, in spite of Sheppard's best efforts, trouble can't be far behind. Woolsey's command is given a baptism of fire when the Alpha team is ambushed off world, and hampered by a lack of intel they truly are on their own.
Disclaimer: MGM own Stargate: Atlantis. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no revenue is being made from copyright material. No infrigement intended.

Episode 1 (Harm's Way) and Act One and Two of Episode 2 (Chain of Command) available here.

Personal Notes: Mostly a general story, but heavy references to Michael and Teyla scattered through the episode. Can't say much more without giving too much away :)

Comments

[cedargrove.livejournal.com]

I actually saw your post on GW the other day, thanks for that. Remind me which story Alauralen has written?

Ah yes, /that/ scene. Took an age to write. Most of the M/T scenes do, probably because I stress over getting them 'right' Obviously I'm going to have to go back and read that again before I start on Enmity.

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Well by now you know the identity of the mysterious 'angel' *grin* Don't you feel special?

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Must start working on the summary for Mantle

[gospikey.livejournal.com]

No problem.

Alauralen, she wrote *goes to look it up* the one shot "The Conception," and "Admissions," the chaptered sequel.

It needs an update or 10, urgently... ^^

Jen (gypsy_morph), a friend of hers, did update her Todd/Mia story by the name of "The Distant Journey," but of course it's an evil cliffie... *ded*

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Yup, *that* scene. *g* It was a really good one. And the 'hiding their emotions' part really fit well with what we know know from "The Queen," so yay!

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Oh yes, I feel *very* special. Muahahaha. I must say Act 3 is *very* interesting, and I'm looking forward to what parts of it get tied up in Acts 4 and 5, and what 'problems' might get taken into the next episode...

The cliffie is evil, that I can tell you! (Or probably confirm.) :D

Hopefully, you'll have it back today, if not that, then tomorrow. I didn't find much in it yet, so... ^^

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Yes, you have to work on that little summary. I'm looking forward to it. Darn, you said something about it to me already, and I forgot! :o Ah well, I'll be surprised again, then. :P

Spikey

[gospikey.livejournal.com]

*Facepalm*

Michael & Todd, of course.

*Continues with Act 3*

Spikey

[cedargrove.livejournal.com]

Ah, yes, see I knew the name rang a bell. I've been reading her story - when I'm not writing. Haven't read Jen's though.

I like writing evil cliffies... what can I say. Speaking of teasing, you should go to the main Atlantis page on the website. There's a banner there I think you'll like. Still working on the summary though.

[gospikey.livejournal.com]

Wait, you *like* evil cliffies, and then you want me to go check out that possible Michael/Todd thing? Hmm, I shouldn't go, really...

*Caves*

Oh. :) Pwetty. :P

I'll send the story back later on. I got tired yesterday.

Spikey

[cedargrove.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I said I like writing evil cliffies. :) I'm just so mean. Still I'm glad you like it - the banner I mean. No problem on the story, that's fine. I can always try writing act 4 & 5.