You're absolutely right. LOL. The thing about these is that we (as writers) were not allowed to have them Beta read before submission... And you can hardly ever spot your own stupid mistakes. LOL
Anyway, glad you enjoyed it - but as for my version of TP, you aint seen /nothing/ yet. Wait until my VS5 reaches the story called "True Perfidy" you'll see it then.
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Date: 2010-12-08 04:39 pm (UTC)Anyway, glad you enjoyed it - but as for my version of TP, you aint seen /nothing/ yet. Wait until my VS5 reaches the story called "True Perfidy" you'll see it then.