Good heavens! To say things are heating up is to say that a nuclear explosion flickered!
Ah, Todd. A full blooded Wraith, just as I thought. Buck up, Keller! You've got the best of the bunch!
Teasing aside... you've trully captured the variety of reactions a human would have to a Wraith, in particular, ahem... intimate stuff. I trully like how you differentiated the Wraith mentality from the human mentality. Our very reaction of: Todd, what about Alicia, you cad?--shows how well you capture the 'shock' of dealing with a non-human intelligent entity; and a very, very intelligent one at that.
As for the ending... I am itching to know what he had found. All this DNA, chromosome, RNA business is killing me, Cedar! :)
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Date: 2009-07-10 11:30 pm (UTC)Ah, Todd. A full blooded Wraith, just as I thought. Buck up, Keller! You've got the best of the bunch!
Teasing aside... you've trully captured the variety of reactions a human would have to a Wraith, in particular, ahem... intimate stuff. I trully like how you differentiated the Wraith mentality from the human mentality. Our very reaction of: Todd, what about Alicia, you cad?--shows how well you capture the 'shock' of dealing with a non-human intelligent entity; and a very, very intelligent one at that.
As for the ending... I am itching to know what he had found. All this DNA, chromosome, RNA business is killing me, Cedar! :)