Only 5 pages this time. Still good for stretching an Icon or three, don't you think so? :P
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she felt him press something small and hard into her left hand and close her fingers over it.
Dunno if I commented on that the last time, but it’s a good thing you wrote ‘small’ in there… Gutter.
"Some of the data is… sensitive," he explained, "and simply cannot be removed from the Hive."
Would that be his Alicia? Lol. Or part of her…
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"If you had been anywhere near the planet," the whisper continued, forced and sounding painful, "you would, in no way, casually suggest—"
Lol. Perhaps, had Todd been near the planet, Todd wouldn’t be suggesting anything anymore. Michael and his booby-traps…
*Remembers what Eiri told me* Awe @ Todd trying his best to have Michael tell him without him having to go.
Are we going to see something from Michael’s pov again soon? Just to see what his mental condition is like at the moment? He was about to give up when he thought Teyla’d been captured….
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"If there is something you need – something that I can… provide – you have only to ask for it, and I—"
Gutter…
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"Just tell me that you and Rodney are going to take care of me up there," she asked softly.
"It's Todd. You'll be fine," he told her.
*Zips it* :D
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"…all those centuries ago… when you took the Humans of this galaxy to experiment on… Did you use your own DNA then as well?"
Hmm, of course Michael can’t say ‘yes’ to that one, because that’s admitting that that little device he built can easily take out not only himself, but his hybrids, and Teyla as well. Not that he still believes she’s alive, but still…
Is Michael crying for Teyla?
Hmm, are we almost done with the Michael torture? I have a feeling stuff is going to be a bit worse before it’s going to get better. :(
Poor Michael is going to have sooooooooooooooooo many new nightmares when this stuff is over. Poor boy. Teyla had better hold him during the night, always. He could use the feeling of safety and non-aloneness…
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"What is it that you need me to do?" she whispered, hiding behind the practicality of their situation, but he was not to be distracted.
Woohoow! That part is new!
Come on, boy, pull her *in* already. *g*
Oh, and good that the Queen didn’t get to see that part anymore. Or did she? Though it might be the difference between a warning, and death. So I’m guessing ‘no’.
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Deliverance: Act 1 - Review part 1
Date: 2009-07-02 08:15 pm (UTC)---
she felt him press something small and hard into her left hand and close her fingers over it.
Dunno if I commented on that the last time, but it’s a good thing you wrote ‘small’ in there… Gutter.
"Some of the data is… sensitive," he explained, "and simply cannot be removed from the Hive."
Would that be his Alicia? Lol. Or part of her…
**
"If you had been anywhere near the planet," the whisper continued, forced and sounding painful, "you would, in no way, casually suggest—"
Lol. Perhaps, had Todd been near the planet, Todd wouldn’t be suggesting anything anymore. Michael and his booby-traps…
*Remembers what Eiri told me* Awe @ Todd trying his best to have Michael tell him without him having to go.
Are we going to see something from Michael’s pov again soon? Just to see what his mental condition is like at the moment? He was about to give up when he thought Teyla’d been captured….
**
"If there is something you need – something that I can… provide – you have only to ask for it, and I—"
Gutter…
**
"Just tell me that you and Rodney are going to take care of me up there," she asked softly.
"It's Todd. You'll be fine," he told her.
*Zips it* :D
**
"…all those centuries ago… when you took the Humans of this galaxy to experiment on… Did you use your own DNA then as well?"
Hmm, of course Michael can’t say ‘yes’ to that one, because that’s admitting that that little device he built can easily take out not only himself, but his hybrids, and Teyla as well. Not that he still believes she’s alive, but still…
Is Michael crying for Teyla?
Hmm, are we almost done with the Michael torture? I have a feeling stuff is going to be a bit worse before it’s going to get better. :(
Poor Michael is going to have sooooooooooooooooo many new nightmares when this stuff is over. Poor boy. Teyla had better hold him during the night, always. He could use the feeling of safety and non-aloneness…
**
"What is it that you need me to do?" she whispered, hiding behind the practicality of their situation, but he was not to be distracted.
Woohoow! That part is new!
Come on, boy, pull her *in* already. *g*
Oh, and good that the Queen didn’t get to see that part anymore. Or did she? Though it might be the difference between a warning, and death. So I’m guessing ‘no’.
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(cont.)