cedar_grove | Enmity Act 4

Title: Enmity
Rating: R (mature readers)
Spoilers:Spoilers for S1-4, (specifically Michael (but who hasn't seen that by now?) and some episodes from the beginning of the official season 5
Summary: As the team continues to battle a powerful Wraith faction, Teyla wakes in the infirmary on Atlantis. She has no memory of what Michael has done to her; knows only one thing... he has her son. Upset by repeated attempts at debriefing, because she cannot - or will not, as certain expedition members insist - tell them what happened, what will she do when Woolsey pushes her too hard... too far?
Disclaimer:MGM own Stargate: Atlantis. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no revenue is being made from copyright material. No infrigement intended.

Acts 1 through 4 now available.

Author's Note: Only thing I really want to note here, for now at least, is that I thought long and hard about it, and finally made the decision to change the name of Teyla's son. This was done in order to create a little distance from the TV Season 5. Oh, and I should probably also give warning of a character death in this story.

Previous Episodes:
Harm's Way (1) and Chain of Command (2) can be accessed here.

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*Drags a part of Harm’s Way into this*

he slowly raised his eyes to gaze on her, where she sat, being ministered to by the two scantly clad human females, who were her body servants

And so perhaps Miss Vega was handed over to him, to be a body slave? Woohoow! Or maybe not just yet.

*Since she came across it, will also put a line from Enmity Act 1 in it*

"The human females in her service are well treated… perhaps even given some small measure of respect."

For the short while they live? She’s better off with being a body servant to Todd. *g*

Another one:

"What, I get to wipe her ass, and your fellow creepies out there leave me the hell alone?"

He chuckled again, "Something like that," he said.

Oh, why was he chuckling, now? *g*

But back to this Act:

Is Todd going to continue being the ‘perfect gentleman’, let’s call it?

And a good thing she didn’t say that she perhaps thought, or was hoping, that they’d be neutered, lol!

Ouch. Sorry, Todd. That was a bad thought, I know. But wow, imagine her having said that aloud… Bwahahaha!

~Tell her I will be sure that the Renegade is brought to her ~

Uh oh… Especially since I read that other thing for the next story.

A thing about Enmity Act 1 that I haven’t asked:

"Todd?"
He spun around to face her so quickly, and startled her so badly that she fell back against the bench that passed for her bed as he started back toward her.
"Do not call me by that name here," he said urgently, glancing at the door as though it would open any moment. "Colonel Sheppard sent you?"

Do you have a special theory about Todd indeed knowing his name (in your story, and on the real show)? Or did he just immediately assume that the name spoken must have been ‘his’, since the Lanteans like to name things?

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Once again he found himself breathless in admiration of the Wraith-Human hybrid's strength and speed,…

Maybe this is the slash that person I told you about was seeking… Lol.

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Poor Major Lorne, and what an ass, that Woolsey, for making Teyla that nervous when she tried to administer the contents of the vial to him.
Now that we’re back with Major Lorne again, and that I’ve found something in Enmity Act 1 again:

"It's in my head!" Lorne screamed, "Make it stop!"

’It’ being Mikey? I think I’ve rambled on a bit there, but in the end no real answer was given?

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"How does it feel, Colonel Sheppard, to know that it's me she calls for in the dead of night; me she reaches for when she's in need, and this time—"

"I know what you're doing," Sheppard snarled, tightening his grip on his weapon, "and it's not going to work!"

As you’re snarling, and you’re still not shooting him, it *is* in fact working. The silly boys can’t play nicely together. Poor John, that bad Mikey poking him exactly where it hurts. :P

*Hands Michael a pitchfork*

What?

*blushes*

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Teyla dialled the address where she wanted to go immediately from that planet? She should know better, they can find it like that!

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(cont.)

Just for clarification:

"It's in my head!" Lorne screamed, "Make it stop!"

’It’ being Mikey? I think I’ve rambled on a bit there, but in the end no real answer was given?

The rambling happened back in Enmity Act 1, all the theories concerning Lorne... Should that not have been clear.

Some of my 'enters' left for a vacation... Meh.

Spikey

Vega probably /would/ be better off serving Todd. I'm sure he has more patience than the Queen at the very least...

Todd was chuckling because he can appreciate the humour in the statement... at least in as far as it went.

Todd, is an interesting one - perfect gentleman, erm... no. Not exactly...

LOL Neutered Wraith. *chuckles* If Michael got his way, yeah.

Todd is turning out to be quite the complicated fellow actually... very interesting...

Do you have a special theory about Todd indeed knowing his name (in your story, and on the real show)? Or did he just immediately assume that the name spoken must have been ‘his’, since the Lanteans like to name things?

I'm sure, with the intelligence that Todd no doubt has people gathering for him about Atlantis, and the people there, that he's well aware that Sheppard calls him Todd. Not quite sure entirely how he /feels/ about it just yet... but... he knows.

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LOL - NO! I am /not/ writing Sheppard/Michael slash. *ewwwww*

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Yeah, Woolsey is an all round 'ass' and it's only going to get worse... (ooops, that was my out aloud voice)

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Michael is very /good/ at poking people where it hurts, don't you think?

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She does know better... but she also knows they know she knows... so... she did it slightly a different way. But then you know that by now. :)

Edited 2008-11-13 16:42 (UTC)

And that silly Queen, sitting there with her shoulder bare when there's Wraith boys around her that can't have her...

Okay, maybe that should have been 'Wraithy-man'. Hmm, that looks odd.

Ouch, maybe Michael should be happy that he's still in one piece, or pieces, down there.

I wonder if Kenny told Todd they call him 'Todd', or if Kenny said they called him 'Kenny'... Could be an interesting convo to bring up.

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Not even Todd/Shep? *g*

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I didn't quite catch that... ;-)

I hope Hollick stays down.

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Oh yes, Michael *is*, but then again, it would hurt *him* in exactly the same places, were it reversed.

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Yes, when you put it like that... But McKay was still trying, I think? Silly boy. But she'll be on the move again soon, I think, since she already had that panic-y reaction after the dream in the next Act.

Spikey

Ah, but that's why she does it, to show them what they can't have.

Michael should be very happy.

I doubt it.

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Not even Todd/Shep, no!

If she would allow her Commander, or someone else, to have her, then she would kinda lose her power over them, in one way.

Not that Todd is doing his dang hardest to pretend he fully listens to her...

It might even make Teyla happier, lol.

Like they also didn't hear in The Queen that Teyla was sending out so many Darts to kill Wraith...

No Todd/Shep? Awe!

Spikey

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