cedar_grove | Revelation Completed

Title: Revelation
Rating: NC-17 (adult readers) due to S.L.V
WARNING: Act 1 contains non-con - may be triggering
Spoilers: Some spoilers for S1-4
Summary: On the brink of death, Todd risks an untested serum and is thrust into a spiral of madness and instinct. Meanwhile, Kenny must persuade the inhospitable Wraith Sentinels to transfer the Queen's young to the Nursery facility. On Atlantis, Haddad continues the desperate race to save Keller, that may lead her to follow Beckett into the deepest peril she has yet faced. (WARNING: Contains Non-con essential to the story.)
Disclaimer: MGM own Stargate: Atlantis. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no revenue is being made from copyright material. No infrigement intended.

Acts 1 through 4 now available.

Author's Note: Look guys, the rating says it all, but I'll spell it out. This contains explicit scenes, and the non-con warning appears at the header of the Act's page below the image, and on the Atlantis home page. Act 4 contains depictions of explicit battle. You HAVE been warned. Many thanks

gospikey for hard work in Beta.

Previous Episodes:
Harm's Way (1), Chain of Command (2), Enmity (3), Mantle (4), In Truth... Freedom (5), Letting Go (6), Beyond the Third (7), Deliverance (8), No Way Back, (9) Apostasy (10) and Crossing Lines (11) can be accessed here.

Flat | Top-Level Comments Only

Hey Eirian,

"To live without another's touch or else descend to this… madness of feeding and the long, slow death of our kind."

While reading this, I once again thought back on how I considered that perhaps Jethera is a banned Alteran. Maybe that line is something she made up so the Hive Second (not for much longer) would hopefully stop with his advances toward her?

Or it could be true, I suppose. But the one that made her do this must still be around under one form or another, if she to this day still lives like that. Perhaps not a Wraith then, but an Alteran? Though they are not allowed to interfere.

You’ve definitely given us things to ponder when creating Jethera.

As they sped now toward a meeting between the Five, where was the Hive's commander?

Oh, he’ll be coming back soon, don’t you worry. Or at least part of him is. :P

Carson let his suspicions speak a name hesitantly, "Teyla. You're talking about Teyla," he said.

The frown reappeared on Michael's face. "There is work to do," he snapped. "And little time for your idle speculations.”

Without a further word, he turned and left the holding cell, and Carson knew he was expected to follow… but did so with a lighter heart and maybe the hint of a smile on his face.

*Strong* comeback, Michael, strong comeback. ;-)

Loved Beckett’s smile there.

"You never gave me the chance," he hissed, and surprisingly gently, took her arm from the bars, and uncapping the cylinder, pressed it to her skin, against one of her engorged veins.

Is she addicted to morphine? Wouldn’t be too surprising, after what they put her through.

As the last of Todd's strength failed, he sank to his knees, still clasping the hilt of the Wraith commander's blade in trembling hands. He leaned his head against them and his breath came to him in sobbing gasps.

So happy Todd won, of course. And it’s even more awesome what he’s going to do next. *grin*

"Yes," he said, the menace in his voice spreading throughout the Hive. "We go to hunt my dear brother."

If I remember correctly, his Queen did not want to see the contents of the pods destroyed, so by going hunting how, he’s going up against her order? Not that she’s given a specific order not to go hunt Todd, but I’m taking it won’t be a nice visit?

Are they identical?

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(cont.)

Your comments on Jethera are very interesting - we'll get to find out more about Jet when she gets thrust into a situation and a place she never intended to be in Convocation.

You gotta know that Michael will always trying a give a strong comeback - but Beckett's smile - yes Carson knows what Teyla means to Michael... how could he not?

Y'tesha - if only it were so simple as a morphine addiction.

Todd and his brother are not identical, no.

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