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cedar_grove) wrote2010-12-22 08:00 pm
cedar_grove) wrote2010-12-22 08:00 pm
Crossing Lines - Completed
Title: Crossing Lines
Rating: NC-17 (adult readers) due to S.L.V
Spoilers: Some spoilers for S1-4. (Also Season 5: Whispers)
Summary: Sheppard and the others aboard the Daedalus relentlessly pursue those he feels responsible for the death of their lost companion. Meanwhile Michael, under threat from the Wraith has gone to ground in order to keep Teyla safe. Back on Atlantis, Beckett grows increasingly more worried for Keller, and prepares to take an utlimate, personal risk in order to save her.
Disclaimer: MGM own Stargate: Atlantis. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no revenue is being made from copyright material. No infrigement intended.
Acts 1 - 5 now available.
Author's Note: Look guys, the rating says it all, but I'll spell it out. This contains explicit scenes. Many thanks
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gospikey for hard work in Beta.Previous Episodes:
Harm's Way (1), Chain of Command (2), Enmity (3), Mantle (4), In Truth... Freedom (5), Letting Go (6), Beyond the Third (7), Deliverance (8), No Way Back (9) and Apostasy (10) can be accessed here.
Crossing Lines Act 4 - Review:
Structured, again. Easier.
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Atlantis:
While it’s nice of Ronon to go tell Teyla’s friend of her passing, will he soon be making the same trip to say he made a mistake? That’s a painful situation.
Sheppard, Sheppard, Sheppard… Well, at least he helped controlling the Daedalus there at the end? Still want to slap him for the rest of it, out of it.
It was good to see Major Lorne again. And to see that at least someone doesn’t point a gun at his head if they need something from him. It’s not like he’s going to attack, he’s just waiting for orders, right?
Did Doctor Beckett fly a Puddle Jumper out to a nearby planet?
Wraith:
Oh my God… is the Hive Commander really stupid enough to try that plan with the worshippers? Of course he is. Geesh. Malcolm, get rid of him already. I know you think it’s not time yet, but it’ll save you some time and sanity were you to just do it already.
Okay, that was preferably before he started playing the let’s-get-Isla-fed-to-a-Wraith game. I want to actually smack the Second for saying to her he has not forsaken her. Dude, you tossed her out the door, can’t get more clear than that!
Hmm, the Matron was the mother of the Queens, right? Seems like she’s not dead after all. Nice to know. Well, perhaps if she was his mission would be kind of pointless?
Michael/Teyla:
Again there’s Michael with the being cryptic about what he found out in Teyla’s sample. You mentioned to me before that you found it odd that everyone was assuming it was something bad, but I very much want to start dreaming that she can get pregnant by him after all, though I’d fear for her nearing future with that Queen around there, somewhere. It reminds me of SoW where a Queen threatened to hurt her unborn child. I’ll keep my fingers crossed that whatever’s going on with her is something positive, and all will be well. Yes, I can do that.
I’m happy that Teyla got through to Michael, that he decided not to kill her friends. She knows what he did for her, and she’ll learn to trust him even more now, by showing him he cares.
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Hope you had a good time celebrating Christmas, and that New Year’s will be fun as well.
Looking forward to reading more.
Spikey
Re: Crossing Lines Act 4 - Review:
Ronon and Raisa will see each other again, never fear - or maybe you /should/ fear *insert evil laugh here*
Go ahead and slap Sheppard all you like. He needs it.
Lorne will be in and out in the next few stories.
Yes, Beckett did fly a PJ out to the nearby planet. How else was he to get where he was going without everyone else knowing about it?
Wraith
The stupidity of the Hive Commander knows no limits. Do not fear, he will not be around for much longer.
Malcolm does not wish Isla to come to any harm, but his hands were tied - she killed a Wraith, that's the worst thing that you can do if you're a worshipper.
The Matron is the mother of the Queens, yes. We will see her in all her glory /very/ soon - Sheppard will even give her a name!
Michael/Teyla
You have to know that Michael wouldn't tell anyone what he found if he thought it would in any way endanger Teyla. That said, there will be many 'developments' between Michael and Teyla coming up.
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Had a good time over Christmas, and hope you did as well.
Revelation is coming next, I've been planning it.
Hugs
Eiri
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Just wanted to check if you received the beta for the next part, as nothing's up yet. With your e-mail going insane at times, thought I'd drop a message in here...
Spikey
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Had the stomach flu yesterday. Trying to eat bits today... Ugh.
Spikey