cedar_grove: (michael-evolutiion)
cedar_grove ([personal profile] cedar_grove) wrote2009-11-10 11:09 am
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No Way Back - Completed







Title: No Way Back
Rating: NC-17 (adult readers)
Spoilers: Some spoilers for S1-4. S5 The Seed
Summary: When Teyla learns that Michael is in Wraith hands many old feelings surface, and hoping to bring herself peace, she returns to Atlantis to ask for help in ending her conflict once and for all. Sheppard and the team join her in the mission to recapture Michael from the Hive, but things go terribly wrong, and though Teyla's struggle is ended, it is not at all in the way that anyone intends.
Disclaimer: MGM own Stargate: Atlantis. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no revenue is being made from copyright material. No infrigement intended.

Acts 1 through 4 now available.

Author's Note: Look guys, the rating says it all, but I'll spell it out. This contains explicit scenes. Many thanks [livejournal.com profile] gospikey for hard work in Beta.

Previous Episodes:
Harm's Way (1), Chain of Command (2), Enmity (3), Mantle (4), In Truth... Freedom (5), Letting Go (6), Beyond the Third (7) and Deliverance (8) can be accessed here.

Re: No Way Back: Act 4 - Review part 1

[identity profile] cedargrove.livejournal.com 2009-11-14 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
There's no problem with shortness, like you said to me somewhere, things are getting to be serious...

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The HC was having way too much fun in the bedroom (and still is). Malcolm is beating up on the second, and the Queen, indeed was driven floorward by Ms Teyla. The Hive third is stressed out to the nines trying to keep things working. Overworked and definitely underpaid.

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That hybrid really - just a means to an end, but we might get to see more of him in the future - either that or Michael might decide he's outlived his usefulness.. I don't know. He's probably not going to be happy about the hybrid manhandling Ms Teyla, no.

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Why is the thought of Malcolm asking Sheppard if he's an 'alpha male' so funny?

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Oooh, loved the comment about Sam carter.

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I'm sure Malcolm would have fought with Teyla, just to see how 'good' she was. I'm sure he could 'fit her in' to his plans somewhere see...

Oh yes, Malcolm has plans.

Yeah, he doesn't like that Sheppard manages to get one over on him.

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Michael was, very hurt and very silly.

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Well, she has compassion for him /and/ his plight. Does that count?

Um... what question would that be that she's popping. :P

Yeah, can't show emotion in front of the hybrid - at least, not too much. But soon they'll be behind closed door.

Re: No Way Back: Act 4 - Review part 1

[identity profile] gospikey.livejournal.com 2009-11-28 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Why is that comment of the 'alpha male' so funny?

Are guys really alpha males over here? I mean, with our population we pretty much have a gal for each dude, while with the Wraith you have to fight each other to get the Queen...

That's why it's funny.

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Sam's awesome. Pity she couldn't show it on SGA.

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Malcolm has plans, huh? I think I commented somewhere that about every high placed Wraith out there has plans with hybrid humans? Lol.

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The question Teyla's going to pop at some point? 'Michael, would you please stop with killing all these people?' :P

I wonder if that question is going to get them in another fight like Apostasy - Act 2. *cough*

LOL @ those closed doors. Is he going to yell 'stop' at her each time she wants to turn around toward him when there's hybrids present? :-D


Me.

Re: No Way Back: Act 4 - Review part 1

[identity profile] cedargrove.livejournal.com 2009-11-28 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, I see, I get you now. Well, you only have to watch a bunch of guys going at it, hosing down a joint with testosterone to know that /they/ think there's such a thing as an alpha male.

Malcolm's plans don't involve hybrids... and no actually most Wraith commanders are oblivious to their existance, except as 'servants' of the Abomination.

Oh /that/ question. Yeah, that'll be interesting...

He stopped her this time because he knew she'd get emotional... "Above all you must never..." etc.