Enmity Act 4

[cedar_grove]

Title: Enmity
Rating: R (mature readers)
Spoilers:Spoilers for S1-4, (specifically Michael (but who hasn't seen that by now?) and some episodes from the beginning of the official season 5
Summary: As the team continues to battle a powerful Wraith faction, Teyla wakes in the infirmary on Atlantis. She has no memory of what Michael has done to her; knows only one thing... he has her son. Upset by repeated attempts at debriefing, because she cannot - or will not, as certain expedition members insist - tell them what happened, what will she do when Woolsey pushes her too hard... too far?
Disclaimer:MGM own Stargate: Atlantis. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no revenue is being made from copyright material. No infrigement intended.

Acts 1 through 4 now available.

Author's Note: Only thing I really want to note here, for now at least, is that I thought long and hard about it, and finally made the decision to change the name of Teyla's son. This was done in order to create a little distance from the TV Season 5. Oh, and I should probably also give warning of a character death in this story.

Previous Episodes:
Harm's Way (1) and Chain of Command (2) can be accessed here.

Comments

[cedargrove.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much. :) I love you too. Reviewers Rule!

Well, I'm glad you just finished reading, because I just uploaded the first act of Mantle - which is the continuation of Enmity.

It was a big decision to treat Teyla they way she's treated on Atlantis, but as you say, it does facilitate certain... choices.

The layers come because, as the characters develop, and reveal more and more to me... things start to get more and more complicated. :) But that's the way I like it.

Ah, the good Major-Lorne Hybrid - we haven't seen the last of him yet... even if he /is/ back on Atlantis now.

LOL - I have created a monster. You and Spikey both seem to enjoy the Todd/Vega moments... I think you will like Mantle Act 2 in that case.

Yes, I am evil... it will be a while before you'll see that one completely resolved/revealed. But more will come in Mantle.

[sasusc.livejournal.com]

You have only yourself to blame for feeding Spikey and me Todd/Vega moments. :P Oh I can't wait to read Mantle Act 2!

**grabs printed pages of Mantle Act1 to read**

[cedargrove.livejournal.com]

Enjoy. :)

[cedargrove.livejournal.com]

Sorry, I lied... it's act 3... I'm ahead of myself and I forget that. Sorry.

[sasusc.livejournal.com]

Don't make me wait too long too read it! :P I think I'll try to make some Todd/Vegas manips and icons while I wait. :P

[cedargrove.livejournal.com]

I won't make you wait too long, I'll try not to, anyway.

[gospikey.livejournal.com]

Lol. Enjoying Todd/Vega as well, huh? *g*

Poor, poor needy Todd. And Mikey.

Oh, I think Eiri means Mantle Act 3, because I read Act 2 today, and there's no Todd/Vega in there.

But it looks promising for Act 3, though. *g*

In a couple of days Act 2 might be up, so the wait isn't too long.

We should probably make Eiri write faster, now, though. We're devouring this faster than she can write it.

Oopsie, about a quarter to 3. Bed time.

*Grabs the boys and runs upstairs*

Spikey

[sasusc.livejournal.com]

Yes, writing faster works for me! **grins**

[cedargrove.livejournal.com]

I'm writing as quickly as I can. The only way I could be quicker is if I got some /decent/ VR softward, and could actually speak it... but then I'm not sure that /would/ be quicker... *grin* I'd keep changing it.