cedar_grove | Enmity Act 4

Title: Enmity
Rating: R (mature readers)
Spoilers:Spoilers for S1-4, (specifically Michael (but who hasn't seen that by now?) and some episodes from the beginning of the official season 5
Summary: As the team continues to battle a powerful Wraith faction, Teyla wakes in the infirmary on Atlantis. She has no memory of what Michael has done to her; knows only one thing... he has her son. Upset by repeated attempts at debriefing, because she cannot - or will not, as certain expedition members insist - tell them what happened, what will she do when Woolsey pushes her too hard... too far?
Disclaimer:MGM own Stargate: Atlantis. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no revenue is being made from copyright material. No infrigement intended.

Acts 1 through 4 now available.

Author's Note: Only thing I really want to note here, for now at least, is that I thought long and hard about it, and finally made the decision to change the name of Teyla's son. This was done in order to create a little distance from the TV Season 5. Oh, and I should probably also give warning of a character death in this story.

Previous Episodes:
Harm's Way (1) and Chain of Command (2) can be accessed here.

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You /don't/ want me to count the number of times you did those things... okay.

I love that you snort at Woolsey... all I can say is - some people /never/ learn. He does indeed seem paranoid... and I can't see it getting better any time soon. Getting Teyla's head examined, yeah, but not necessarily on Earth. *evil grin*

And 'we' are going forward? Funny, like it'll be a team thing. As soon as she surrenders herself, I can see Woolsey ordering Keller to sedate her completely, strap her to a bed, give her anti-psychotics and the whole 'special' treatment. Pfft. Butthole.

Now you're getting close...

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Lorne - not necessarily Michael himself coming through, but certainly his influence... his 'standing orders' in respect of Teyla. Or at least Lorne's interpretation of them. (oops, did I just give too much away).

Hollick indeed...

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This particular Queen prefers a little 'fire' in her males - yes. At some time soon I'm going to have to show that, I think...

Yep - Vega touched his chin. You like that?

See... the way I see it, (I think I've said this somewhere before), the Wraith don't /do/ the whole touching thing very much, and when they do, it's significant.

I think you could be right, re Vega Stockholming, if I understand correctly what you mean. And yes, he called her 'dear,' though I think there was a degree of sarcasm in there.

LOL @ the Squea - you did indeed tell me they did get the girls - of course whether they use them or not... that's a different matter.

Yeah, it was a case of "Here you are, Todd my boy, "play" with this.." from the Queen to Todd. LOL - and yes, perhaps Todd is trying to... distance Vega from himself, but... well, you'll see.

Yes, that was the amazing sentence... Told you that it would be bad, with all the funny stuff behind about every sentence. ;-)

See?

Yeah, he'd actually pull such a trick. Don't know if Keller would have followed those orders, but he'd just get Hollick and his men to point a gun at her, or something.

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Well, 'protect the Queen at all costs' would have to be one of those orders, or close enough...

*Hopes that Lorne got Hollick good*

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'Some time soon' falling together with Todd urgently needing to feed?

Oh yes, me likes his lil goatee... Can you imagine playing with it? Twisting it around your index finger... *Gutter*

You might have mentioned that in my early mails with you, concerning M/T, yes.

Party pooper. ^^

Well, on getting them... Todd might be trying to keep his leg stiff. - Wait... Er, yeah. :-)

But? There's a 'but'? Oh, yippie! I love Todd/Vega buts!

Now, I wonder if a Wraith male did use one of the females, would they feed on them afterwards? After all, can't have her spread around the word of him having a lil green tush in the Queen's handmaiden chambers, right?

What? We're Wraith fans. There's *nothing* we haven't discussed yet. And we definitely haven't forgotten *that*.

Oh, should I make you aware that Peter DeLuise said they have *two*? Stunners, that is. If you get it. ;-)

Spikey

There's nothing wrong with saying funny stuff. If something makes you squea, then squea, that's what I say...

Yeah, with Hollick at his side, he has a pretty good bully boy - but even better yet is on the way - worse of course if you happen to be Teyla...

Actually no, I can't imagine playing with Todd's goatee... nope. LOL @ Todd's stiff leg comment - question is, which one?

There's always a but. :)

See... if I answer that question, about my thoughts on what happened is the males do use the females, I might accidentally slip up and give something away that I don't want to. Suffice to say I do have some ideas about that kind of thing.

I'm aware that it's been said they have two 'stunners', yes... Gotta be careful of those Wraith stunners. I've heard they're mighty powerful. LOL

'Worse is on the way'? Oh great...

That had better be the possible whump that's in the summary for the next ep... :D

No? Lol! Right. If I were to say 'all 4', it would be disgusting, right? :P

I should perhaps have said I like Michael and Todd's butts... :D

You mean like the Wraith use their sharp teeth and bit the person's tongue out? So they won't kiss and tell?

Powerful? LOL. Or addictive? *g*

Teyla and Vega might be in for some fun. Or at least one of those two...

Spikey

Are /we/ well and truly in the gutter or /what/? LOL

Home is gutter. Gutter is good. Home is good.

:D

Spikey

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