Enmity Act 4

[cedar_grove]

Title: Enmity
Rating: R (mature readers)
Spoilers:Spoilers for S1-4, (specifically Michael (but who hasn't seen that by now?) and some episodes from the beginning of the official season 5
Summary: As the team continues to battle a powerful Wraith faction, Teyla wakes in the infirmary on Atlantis. She has no memory of what Michael has done to her; knows only one thing... he has her son. Upset by repeated attempts at debriefing, because she cannot - or will not, as certain expedition members insist - tell them what happened, what will she do when Woolsey pushes her too hard... too far?
Disclaimer:MGM own Stargate: Atlantis. This story is for entertainment purposes only and no revenue is being made from copyright material. No infrigement intended.

Acts 1 through 4 now available.

Author's Note: Only thing I really want to note here, for now at least, is that I thought long and hard about it, and finally made the decision to change the name of Teyla's son. This was done in order to create a little distance from the TV Season 5. Oh, and I should probably also give warning of a character death in this story.

Previous Episodes:
Harm's Way (1) and Chain of Command (2) can be accessed here.

Comments

[cedargrove.livejournal.com]

Thank you, my dear. It's always good to hear in feedback that people enjoyed reading. Actually I enjoyed writing that - there were some... interesting scenes in there, writing wise.

[traveler64.livejournal.com]

***there were some interesting scenes in there, writing wise.

I am not good at reviews, as I said, but oh, yes, I know--I could tell. I bet one of the scenes you got a kick out of--among many others--was the one between Vega and Todd. That was priceless. The scenes with the Wraith Queen were powerful. And, I appreciated the level of maturity in the scenes between Michael and Shep. By maturity I mean--it was written for adults, with depth and layers of emotion, not like some manga with 'zap' "boom" etc.

Great stuff! (now that was literate, wasn't it. "Stuff".)

[cedargrove.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I did get a kick out of the Vega/Todd scene... Every now and then, you have to just inject a little humour into the story, no matter /how/ dark. That Wraith Queen scares me... and I have a feeling we haven't seen /anything/ yet... The Shep/Michael scene was actually a pleasure to write, (don't take that the wrong way, I don't mean it's nice to see them being mean to each other just... It came together very nicely, easily)... but has massive ramifications.

Stuff is a great word. I love it.

[gospikey.livejournal.com]

About 'stuff'...

Back in the days I was an avid 'Buffy the Vampire Slayer' fan, each time I had to type 'stuff' online, in my mails, for school, etc. the first thing that came out was 'stuffy'.

Man, I hit the return button a lot back then. *g*

Spikey